When I compare my rough drafts and final draft, I notices that my first draft of my literary narrative I was off topic. Even though I wasn’t an excellent writer, I reread my literacy narrative and reorganization my thoughts to make my paper sound more fitting. It took me a few days to finish my second draft. For my second draft, I let one of my classmate to review my second draft. When I received my second draft, I notices I had a tons of grammar mistakes, and fragment sentences.
When revising my literary narrative, I notices fragment sentences and grammar I have trouble with. I know as a writer, I always forget the grammar rules. Grammar rules can be very tricky for me. As for fragment sentences, I sometimes forgot to put a subject or verb in sentences. As a college writer, I should be doing some grammar reviews.
From what I learned, peer reviewing with an other classmate was great way to get a response on my literacy narrative. It helps me on what I need to work on as a college writer. In sum I hope to believe that final draft is great. From what I could tell that my final draft sounds better from the other drafts.
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